Peer Review SoM

Paragraphs: 43/50 pts. She had many paragraphs, but they weren't as strong as they could've been.
 Quotes: 24/25 pts. It was so close to be being perfect! She had the correct amount of quotes and they were very descriptive and informative.

Inverted Pyramid: 22/25 It could have been a tad bit more in the inverted pyramid layout, but other than that little fix, it was good.

With an additional 10 points

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